Peer Review by Suri Purefoy (United States of America)()

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Do You Remember?

By: Aspen Gray


FREE WRITING

Do you remember

The games we played? The secrets shared?

Do you remember

A friend you once knew? Time crumples, and

My memories fade, but life trails on and on.

Yet though it hurts, I ask you still

Do you remember?


Rondelet Format


Message to Readers

What's your favorite line?


Peer Review

I absolutely love the line "Yet though it hurts, I ask you still", and also the line proceeding.


Sadness. A twinge of hope. Wanting the past.


I don't have any questions— fantastic job!


Reviewer Comments

This truly is a beautiful piece, Aspen!