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Message to Readers
What's your favorite line?
Peer Review
I absolutely love the line "Yet though it hurts, I ask you still", and also the line proceeding.
Sadness. A twinge of hope. Wanting the past.
I don't have any questions— fantastic job!
Reviewer Comments
This truly is a beautiful piece, Aspen!