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Thank you for reading my writing!!! Any comments are appreciated! Love y'all<3


March 20, 2021

Friendship is Bertie Bott's Every Flavour Beans.
You never know what you'll taste next.
Maybe it tastes like smores you used to eat together at camp.
Or like lemons, your last fight that lasted a week.
Maybe it tastes like grass; May fair.
Or perhaps it tastes like tears from when I moved.
You still need to be brave and taste the next one.
Shoutout to all the Harry Potter fans!(^_^) I'm pretty proud of my analogy and I tried to incorporate some specific details. I'll keep working on it though.


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  • SamRose

    I submitted my review of this for the Review Club! You should get it within a day. :)

    about 1 month ago
  • TerenNeret

    WE LOVE A METAPHOR ! I love how you tied in such emotion to really hammer home this vignette of a friendship that's ended. Bittersweet and beautiful, this feels like the pink starburst of flash poetry.

    about 1 month ago
  • SamRose

    Ooh I love it! HEY FELLOW POTTERHEAD!!

    about 1 month ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    ok that is a really brilliant analogy! AND HP FOR LIFE! the last sentence... wow. that hits hard.

    about 2 months ago