United States

to be victorious at a cost that outweighs the success
any pronouns
previously abby.a

Message to Readers

part three/five of my poetry collection. if you haven't, please check out the other parts- they're linked in the footnotes

kissing the fragments / of secrets

March 20, 2021



h u s h

i have one thing just for you
a special little gift
i'll pass it to you with whispers
silent wind drawing you close

tell a single soul
and your lungs will collapse
the precious secret betrayed
i'd be careful with where you speak


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  • maria.

    Whoa! I'm not sure if you did it intentionally but you used a lot of sibilant sounds and it really adds to the whole effect of whispers and secrets, it's really effective :)
    re: tysm! I used a reference generator so hopefully it's all correct :)

    about 2 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    djhlsgdhfsdghfa wow this is so good!!! seriously, i love it so much. this just feels like the passing of a secret -- you've got the emotions and the connotations and everything down. :) i love this series so so so much! <3 <3 <3

    about 2 months ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    oooohhh this series is giving me chills—each poem is more than strong enough on its own, yet when read together, they're breathtaking. each one feels mysterious, haunting, deeply emotional, whispered with passion.

    about 2 months ago