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It was quite sad and tragic but relatable!
I think it's nice in its simplicity and really makes one fill in all the gaps which is really cool! (p.s. I know you probably didn't really need peer reviews on this but I just wanted to let you know how I think a period would look really cool at the end- which of course, feel free to ignore because it's just my opinion :) )
I hope your foot heals really fast :) Have a great day/night :)