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Okay I first want to say that I’m no sing writer! But this is amazing! I don’t know a lot about writing songs so feel free to discard what I say. But the chorus is may favorite! I feel like it applies to so many people, and it just really hits home.
I highlighted a few suggestions, but again I don’t know the tune so I don’t know if they work XD
You are really good song writer! And I’m sure this song is even better with a tune XD best of luck with showing your friend this!