Ramses IV

Saudi Arabia

Made in Pakistan
Music, anime, books, candles, the beach, and writing.
Book series in progress called "The Condemned Ones".

Message to Readers

And no, Styx and stones will not break my bones. Only words can ever hurt me.


March 19, 2021

PROMPT: March Grab Bag

Rowing down my river of broken dreams and hopes
A small girl once drowned in these waters
Made by my own expectations 
tandards that I knew I'd never reach
Each wish pointless, should've learned to swim
Should've kept my tears in my eyes
In my own sorrow, I drowned
Victory is a word I shall never know
-An acrostic poem (in which each letter spells out a word or phrase) with your username (by BriRiley)


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  • BriRiley

    Ohh this is so sad and sweet! Good job!

    6 months ago
  • Jason_claire :)

    replying- OOOPPS. It works out super well either way though

    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    This is great! My acrostic poem was so random lol, but I think yours fits together really nice!

    6 months ago
  • Nyla

    Wow! This is powerful! I can't even choose a favourite line, all of it is so amazing!! And this is honestly so relatable!! Wow- just so emotional- really well done!!

    6 months ago
  • Jason_claire :)

    Wow, this is super powerful . . . . And I also 1000% relate. You're message board is super poetic btw.
    replying- Ah, yes. So it shall :)

    6 months ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    "Should've kept my tears in my eyes / In my own sorrow, I drowned"
    Wow.... Speechless! This is beautifully done!

    6 months ago