i write poetry
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second book coming soon
Written By: solarflair
March 16, 2021
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ahhh! you commented on my work, thank youu! your work is absolutely stunning! i love your way with words ahah <3
Honestly your writing is just straight up amazing. I really loved this piece.
dang, the cadence in that was aweeesomeee... the only thing I would maybe change would be in the second line replace "that" with something else- I've found "that" is not always the best choice when it comes to articles :)
re: thank you so much for the comment! It's super helpful :) Also thx for the follow <3
Re: Oh yeah it’s mainly girls actually from what I’ve seen around and lol. Yes, it is true that more males than females surf professionally due to lack of funds for the world surf league on the women’s side. And yes at the end of the day ads are ads but it’s not just in surfing. Like in a sports store I go to in PV they only had male models with jerseys and stuff. Yes, I have watched soul surfer I absolutely love it! Ah, doing something about it. Have done that but I mean they either don’t respond or say I’m ‘confused’. It’s unfortunate and at this point I kind of ignore it after writing all these letters :/ But thanks for your comment! And the follow :)
woww this is so good! i've only been to new orleans like once in my life (which was when i was maybe four) and i don't remember a thing. i like how you describe what a (child's or adult's?) future will be like there.
re: lol yeah maybe don't use the first one...
re: your work flooded???! yikes... hope the week got a little better than what it was when you commented... :] you should definitely sleep. although i hate sleeping i cannot deny it's healing properties ;) hoping your day is full of springtime sun!! <3
re: aha! I found it! I'm in class right now, but I'll listen to it when I have a break. It looks awesome!
re: what the freak, I don't see it :(. Are you sure it's public?
re: thank you thank you thank you! I'm gonna try talking to my friends more often when I feel this way. And I am totally open to a playlist. Music always makes me feel a bit better, cause it's like another world I can escape to :)
hello to you as well! ooh i like this poem... it's been a long time since i've read your work and i missed it :)
i'm doing pretty good, enjoying the springing of spring haha. how about you?
oh yesss!! this piece is a-m-a-z-i-n-g!!
re: heeeeeyyyyyyy!! i've been chilling at home lol. you know the regular 'let me just sit here and rethink life' type of thing? yeah, that's mostly what ive been up to. kinda started quarter 4 of school on a bam so that sucks. other than that, we're just hanging onto life :P wbu?
Re: Heyyy wassup caleb :)
hm i really like the lines "she tells him to lead a simple, blue life
but still he will take the sunless South train
for me, i will leave again as she cries" have a good day/night!
re: yeah its kind of similar for me
re: thank you.. yeah i do feel like that a lot i lose a lot of sleep and im always doing the little compulsions or having anxiety attacks especially at night
Madelyn (Carolina Girl)
This is actually great Caleb. don't change it
re: just be honest and open about your experiences. tell your story as it happened without sugarcoating. be real, and be you. that's what i do at least.
Re: Good! I'm sleepy today lol but overall pretty nice. :) I'm currently watching American Idol with my mom and brother.
Hmm this has a really cool vibe that I'm so here for. Also hey Caleb. How are you doing?
Re: Aw, thx!!
re: woah~ thats really neat
re: sorry I forgot to put the re
and that sounded creepy lol
how old are you
re: I see, I see
how long have you been on wtw for?
Wow! This flowed really nicely! I love love love the "her" before saying "she" it just makes it so easy to picture how it would be read!! RE: Thank youuu and yeah! I joined about 2 weeks ago so pretty new! And thank you!
re: aww thx! truth be told I am VERY stuck so I started writing a prequel, lol
but I came up with a sci-fi idea: Lizzy Loud Vs The Universe! lol
re: Ahh, yes! I love that song! :)
re: Thanks! What song was it inspired by? I thought I saw some references to older music, but I don't know many people who listen to that sort of stuff.
Did you plant any song references in this? If so, I think I caught a few. This piece was amazing by the way. :)
Re: thank you
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