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When talking about pirates, it's very common to remember the sea music! This poem flow as well as the music! The rhythm, the way the words rhyme, this could even be a song! I loved it.
I love how the poem is very descriptive and even mysterious, but I love to have developed characters in this narrative, I think it would give an interesting touch to the piece.
I adore this poem! Is very whimsical, rhythmic, and has an adventurous narrative that is very interesting! Congratulations!