Draco Malfoy

Australia

Welcome people!
14
Female
Homeschooled
Christian
Writer
Reader
Dog lover
Paramedic wannabe
Extreme Harry Potter lover
Gryffindor
Crafty
Not fashionable at all.
Favourite bible verse is Matthew chapter 6 verse 34
Be happy, don’t worry

Message to Readers

Once again any reviews would be nice

Tears

March 17, 2021

FREE WRITING

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The young girl sat and cried,
Even though she tried and tried.
To not show her sadness,
To not feel this badness.

She was hunched over,
Trying so hard to cover,
Her sorrowful tears,
That she could not clear.

Her mother came in soft and slow,
Even though the girl asked her to go.
She came and sat near,
And wiped away her sorrowful tears.




 
I guess the moral of this story is that you should never try to hide your tears, it may seem like it is the best thing to do. But it will only hurt you more, the stress of hiding you tears is worse then telling someone. Plus that someone can wipe the tears away for you.
I hope you guys like this one and that you stay happy!


 

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8 Comments
  • HooriaNadeem1249

    *Thumbs up* this was brilliant!


    13 days ago
  • Procrastinatingwriter02

    I love the emotion I can feel in this! It is easy to read and has a strong message behind it. Awesome work :)


    about 1 month ago
  • BlueWolf (Semi Hiatus)

    The concept is really beautiful, and inspiring. I think it is lovely. I especially like the rhyming.


    about 2 months ago
  • Ava Marie

    Re: Thank you so much!!!!
    This is so pretty!!


    about 2 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    This is so sweet <3


    about 2 months ago
  • barelybear

    Re: ahhh thank you for checking in! I’m doing pretty good, all things considering. A little too much work and a little too few writing ideas, but we’re managing :)
    I’ve been looking for something to review, and I think I’ll do this piece, but if you know of any other new writers seeking feedback like your sister, I’ll have a look at their pieces too :D
    Anyway, how are you doing? Hope you’re having a great night down under! (Wait maybe it’s the evening now - it’s kinda early here)


    about 2 months ago
  • SamRose

    Oh this is so pretty! You cram so much meaning into a short poem, and this could be interpreted so many ways! I love it!


    about 2 months ago
  • BriRiley

    Awww! This is so beautiful and it has a great meaning! If you hold in all your emotions you can become depressed and have health issues. So I totally agree! :D


    about 2 months ago