Grigo

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2020

March 13, 2021

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                                            The year started fine

                                    then the problems came in a line
                                   The masks were slapped on 

                                   The schools were knocked out
                                    The toilet paper went bye 
                                    The deaths said "Hi"
                                    It expanded, it grew
                                    The house became our world 
                                    Our world had changed 
                                    It was rearranged
                                    My life became small
                                    Everything on a call
                                    My whole life on a screen
                                    Wait there's a vaccine?
                                                Will
                                                 We 
                                                  Be
                                                 Fine
                                                 After
                                                  All? 
I worked hard on this. This poem concludes all the difficulties with the year 2020 and the virus and so on. It is my first time posting on Write the world and I hope you guys liked it. FYI it is meant to look like a Cyringe  

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6 Comments
  • Minvra

    Oh, by the way, I submitted a review. It's probably processing tho.


    6 months ago
  • Minvra

    You're a wonderful poet. What I love is how you seem to write this in a "we" sort of way. On the outside, it's very simple and probably the next generation wouldn't understand the full context, but for those living through this, you are having us fill in the gaps of our experiences. You, the poet, are just creating the canvas that says "paint me!"


    6 months ago
  • Nyla

    Wow! This was written really well and I love the formatting!! "The house became our world" is such a beautiful way of wording it! RE: Awww, thank you!


    6 months ago
  • ‧͙⁺˚*・༓☾ Azalea ☽༓・*˚⁺‧͙

    I love how you used rhyme and visual presentation to give us a sense of whats happening.


    6 months ago
  • WolfyPop

    I love this!!!! It has a really unique format and rhythm. Well done! ^-^


    6 months ago
  • nolongeractive

    This is so pretty and simple yet relatable. I cannot wait to see what you do next!


    6 months ago