I sat on it and wanted to add that last line :)
Written By: Nyla
March 14, 2021
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Re: Aw, thanks so much!!! I've gotten a new idea so hopefully, that'll give me the inspiration to write :)
re: thx so much
I'm submitting it for op ed but its not really an op ed piece but whatever
i really like this...the simplicity makes it more powerful, bc it's just raw and full of emotion. the whole piece was beautiful, and the formatting adds to that! oh and the last line was definitely a great addition :)
re: thank you so much!! and no problem :D
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I can relate to this and love the repetitiveness that makes it almost like a song while stating a sad story
Wow, there's so much emotion pouring out of this lovely piece! The last line is super satisfying and definitely pairs well with the entire poem :)
Re: thank you so much!!! I really appreciate it and I'm so glad you liked my piece! Your comment absolutely made my day! Also, I'm so thrilled that I made your sister happy :)
re: Maybe, wtw does some wacky stuff sometimes lol.
Ooh I'm glad you added the last line, it works well.
This absolutely beautiful! I got emotional just reading it... And the unique formatting gives it such an awesome feel ^-^ Well done!!! I love it :)
Re: OMG! Thank you so much!! That comment was incredibly kind and uplifting; and of course, you have so much talent and I can't wait to see what else you write!
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