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Hi, it's my first piece and I would really appreciate it if you could leave any kind of feedback on it : )

Gabsie the poem

March 13, 2021

PROMPT: March Grab Bag

Ghostlike, he starts to follow me,
And I hear the silent tap, tap, tap of his little feet,
By the time I turn around, he's already gone,
Sand-like tail turning 'round the corner.
I pretend I don't know he's there,
Eyes like copper, still, lurking in the dark.
An acrostic poem (in which each letter spells out a word or phrase) with your username (by BriRiley)


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  • Zirong

    Awww I really enjoy this piece! Such a clever and creative response to the prompt!

    5 months ago
  • Ramses IV

    This should be narrated in a horror movie, in my opinion. It'd be so cool.

    5 months ago
  • Jasmin khawar

    "Eyes like copper, still, lurking in the dark." This line is mesmerising! Ahhh so gorgeous

    5 months ago
  • Busssy.Beee

    The onomatopoeia is great! And the last line is just chills!!

    5 months ago
  • Avril

    Aw this is so cute! And such a creative way to use the prompt! I love the "tap tap tap" part. Welcome to Write the World! If you ever need anything, drop a comment on one of my pieces! ;)

    5 months ago