Nyla

Canada

15
She/her

Message to Readers

My sister said to tell everyone reading this, "Have a beautiful day! :)" Any positive feedback would be lovely :)

My 8 year old sister's first attempt at Haiku's :)

March 12, 2021

FREE WRITING

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Fall
The fall leaves are crisp
All colours from red to green
Oak, maple, birch, I see.

Water
I stand by the lake,
Water trickles down my skin,
I feel cold and light.

Jungle Madness
The jungle is green;
birds, mammals, reptiles, and fish.
Fresh air surrounds me.

Cherry Blossom
Pink flowers blossom,
Soft petals fall in meadows,
Smells like perfume.

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11 Comments
  • nolongeractive

    This is so cute omg!


    6 months ago
  • McK13

    These haikus are so amazing and incredibly written!! Your sister is very talented and she has a great role model to look up to :) Please tell her great job from me!


    6 months ago
  • pluto-

    Aww this is really amazing!


    6 months ago
  • SamRose

    Re: Aw, thx XD That means a lot.


    6 months ago
  • FantasyOtter12

    Wow! These are amazing! I love how detailed all these descriptions are :)


    6 months ago
  • SamRose

    Wow, these are such a good attempt for an eight year old! Tell her good job and to keep writing! :) Obviously she takes after her older sis.


    6 months ago
  • psithurism

    Aww, these are so sweet. Tell her she did a wonderful job! :)


    6 months ago
  • Busssy.Beee

    Ahhh!! Would you please let your sister know that she's so talented? This is so simple but so magnificent!! The haiku about cherry blossoms is my favorite ;) Hope the both of you have a fantastic day/night!


    6 months ago
  • Yellow Sweater

    Thank you for sharing:)


    6 months ago
  • Yellow Sweater

    Aw! So wonderful!


    6 months ago