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Message to Readers

Ayyyyyyyy macarena

This is about an actual person oop-

can i be your other people?

March 11, 2021

FREE WRITING

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He told you to move on
I told you time and time again
he’ll never be good enough for you but
you never cared

but you’re stuck on him
and I’m stuck on you

so can i be your other people?
i’ll hold you through the night
when its dark I’ll be your light
can i be your someone new?
we’ll do all the things we used to
except now i get to call you mine

he told you you meant nothing to him
and i told you never listen to a word he says
but you were so caught up in pleasing him
you never heard me

but You’re stuck on him
and I’m stuck on you

So can i be your other people
ill hold you through the night
when its dark ill be your light
can i be your someone new?
we’ll do all the thing we used to
excpet now i get to call you mine

he said ‘see other people’
he said ‘find someone new’
i tried to tell you the same thing
but i know you never knew
see i was to blinded
by the love that i felt
that i didn’t even notice
you were after someone else
i loved you first loved you best
i was better than the rest
but you took my love and gave it
to some other boy instead
darling i really saw
a future together
excpet now its all gone
for worse or for better

so can i be your other people?
i’ll hold you close and tight
think about you in the night
can i be your someone new?
if you’d just take a chance
you’ll never fall ill hold your hand

Can i be your other people?

can i be your someone new?
 
Had this idea for awhile now, and i needed a break from math and it just flowed :) enjoy my crappy songwriting lol

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5 Comments
  • pyrrhic

    so emotional and lovely. wow. beautiful.
    "but you’re stuck on him
    and I’m stuck on you"
    I REALLY LOVE THIS LINE. so powerful and it really moves you and allows you to see what's going on.


    6 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    prettyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ahhhhhhh :'[]


    6 months ago
  • Melancholy Celestial

    I love the idea behind this song! Your creativity and talent never cease to amaze me, especially in the songwriting department. Keep writing<3


    6 months ago
  • Nyla

    I love this!! Especially the concept for "other people", it's really cool! This song is a really great story- and that's what songs are supposed to be so great job! This "but you’re stuck on him
    and I’m stuck on you" really evoked emotion and I love the last two lines, I can imagine Taylor Swift singing the song and the last two lines to be the stretched out, barely more than a whisper type! p.s. could you maybe check out something I've written and give me some feedback cause you're a really great writer! :)


    6 months ago
  • ~rain~

    I love this. Not crappy at all.

    Re: Ehh not really. I'm a lil mad at someone at the moment, a friend who I've known for almost 2 years. He was nice but now he's mad at me all of a sudden *sigh* probably because he used to have a crush on me and I turned him down...


    6 months ago