Hailie Ogden

United States

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Forever Lost
Writing=life

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I think that no one sucks at writing, the first draft is always going to be messy and criticized, but the best writers pull through it and revise their writing until they believe its perfect.

Anguished Leaving

March 11, 2021

FREE WRITING

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Warm brown eyes
Trailing after me
Filled with sadness
And longing

Don't look back
Don't look back
Don't look back

My love watches
As I board the plane
Watching as I leave
Not to be back for long

With grace on her brow
She turns away
Hiding her tears
Of anguish

I had to leave my love
Had to watch
As she hid her feeling
Of sadness

She glanced back
Her honey eyes
Filled with those
Silvery tears

I looked into them
I love you
I mouthed
She turned away with a sob

And I stared after her
Our bodies getting farther apart
As my plane lifts into the air
I see her leave

Without a glance back
We both turn away
Trying to not fall apart
Moving on until the time we reunite

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1 Comment
  • Nyla

    Wow! This was so sad and poetic! "With grace on her brow" was my favourite line because it was such a beautiful way to word it. But I still love how there's hope when you say, "until the time we reunite" p.s. I love your message- everyone has a story and everyone can write!! :)


    6 months ago