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wondering when i'd finally get better was keeping me from actually getting better, so i started using my time to wonder about better things

i think i've lost a friend

March 11, 2021



smiles like the clouds;
        soaring above anyone who cares

laughing like the rain;
        melodic and a special kind of tune 

loneliness like the ocean
        seemingly endless from this perspective
spanning until the horizon in each direction
        how long until this flimsy raft reaches land?

belting out lyrics like a lion's roar;
        prideful and majestically terrifying

trust coming easier than breathing
        inhale, exhale... or i could just talk to you

you grabbed me by the heart
        and squeezed
and my god i've never felt
        more constricted
lamenting the cruelty of ignorance and hurt


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  • nolongeractive

    This is outstanding and your words just are so lovely and impactful. Your writing will definitely change the world! Also, the title is so powerful and moving!

    6 months ago
  • Nyla

    wow! this was so great, I really loved the vivid imagery because it really brought me into the poem!

    6 months ago
  • Deleted User is it possible for a poem to leave you breathless?
    (and, my dear friend my heart goes out to you <3. Going through a similar thing :))

    7 months ago
  • Blue Jay

    This is very pretty and heartbreaking at the same time. Beautiful poem

    7 months ago
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    7 months ago
  • Lata.B

    Oh I love how you wrote this! This is beautiful!!

    7 months ago