FantasyOtter12

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*Est. 7/6/20*
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~Joined with best friends jztpenguin and mindfruit!!

~WtW adopted by ze amazing Anne Blackwood ^-^

~ "A writer's job is to make the unclear clear and the clear unclear"
~"You. M. Ust."
-mindfruit 2020/2021

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~Fav music genres -EDM-Lofi-Deep House-Ambient-Dubstep-

>Tennis & Piano with a bit of Guitar, Drums, and Digital Photography<

~"The truth is a painful reminder of why I prefer to live among the lies."
-Aaron Warner, Unravel Me by Tahereh Mafi

*Oh also - if u read this far down cool - plzz drop a link to any piece u want reviewed, ill most likely do it unless its like 500 pages long lol

Acrostic Time with FantasyOtter12

March 13, 2021

PROMPT: March Grab Bag

23
An acrostic poem (in which each letter spells out a word or phrase) with your username (by BriRiley)

Flying birds into the night
All of the crows stop with the light
Never again shall they tweet
Their little sad songs, they were so sweet
A human looks down from below
Seeing all the glory he will never achieve
Yet somehow still believing that the end will glow

.............................................................

Others see
The misfortune of others
The
Early bird gets the worm but it
Receives the curse of the jealousy from others

.............................................................

1 little otter was there in the water
2 big sharks came wandering after
 
Thanks @BriRiley for the prompt! Loved it and I hope everyone enjoys reading!

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38 Comments
  • Busssy.Beee

    oh yes!! i love the last two lines!

    She tilted her head up towards the crystal sapphire sky, her face illuminating with the soft rays of sunshine. The field of tulips were blooming beautifully in front of her, gleaming in a mosaic of vibrant reds, oranges, and yellows. The chirps of a nearby starling sounded by her right ear and she turned her head. She watched as the small bird fluttered in a pattern that seemed to spell out: https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/224885/version/473812.
    Soon, another starling flew towards the bird, the two spiraling together in the air. They looked so perfectly matched, so well suited just for one another. She sighed, wondering who would be the one suited for her.


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: lol, yeah. XD Well, I’m excited to see you there, sir! :)


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Hi, F’Otter! How goes it? Excited for tomorrow?!


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Good! And thanks! :)


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Aw hey F'Otter! I'm feeling a little sick today but overall okay. Hbu? Thanks for checking in btw. ^u^


    6 months ago
  • Ellington Stone

    Woah, this is really good!! I love the last one. Simple, but awesome at the same time.
    Re: Aww, thanks!!


    6 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    re: tanks very much, It was funny--we went to the beach cause my sister and her boyfriend saw on a tiktok that it was all lit up. It was like midnight XD


    6 months ago
  • SamRose

    Re: Thank you! :))


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: I’m great, thank you! Excited for Saturday! ;) And thank you about the piece too! :)


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Hey, F’Otter! How are you doin’?


    6 months ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    She sat on the hillside, running her fingers along the blades of grass. The sky was covered in bruised clouds, threatening to dump rain on her. But she didn't really care. Searching the ground, she found a clover and picked it, twirling it between her thumb and forefinger. It was a three-leaf clover. How uniconic. But after a while of staring at the plant, she notice something odd. A sequence of letters and numbers were facing her. https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/224356/version/472170
    But out of the corner of her vision, she noticed two figures approaching. Two boys, looking like complete opposites of one another. Each boy holding a piece of her heart. But how could she ever decide which one held more? She frowned at the clover, and then back at the boys who faced her with anger. Whoever said clovers were lucky obviously lied.


    6 months ago
  • _Delphiruns2theocean_

    Re: Thank you! :)


    6 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    re: yeah same. maybe we'll stumble across each other at the beach one day. Have a good night, Otter!


    6 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    re: we went a tooooon last summer. we literally just drove along PCH for hours and got out at laguna.... I think? it was pretty great.
    (fairly certain there was sand in my hair for a week.)


    6 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    re: I absolutely love marine biology. Anything that has to do with water, really.
    Oh! that's cool--Huntington is probably one of my favorite beaches. What's yours?


    6 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    re: ha! I haven't lived elsewhere. I actually lived right next to Huntington, but then moved up to the mountains--but still frequent the beach. Also kinda hard to study marine biology in the middle of nowhere...


    6 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    re: immm okay lol. not loving the fact that ill be landlocked in about a year, and I have a meeting with a teacher tomorrow, but life's okay.


    6 months ago
  • BriRiley

    *XD * smacks for head in embarrassment*


    7 months ago
  • BriRiley

    Ooo! The ending is so thrilling! This is awesome! Xd


    7 months ago
  • nolongeractive

    I love this piece so much and it carries so much meaning! It is so brilliant!


    7 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    re: ewh no. I am seriously regretting this. I NEED MAH SLEEP.....
    how're you doing?


    7 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: yeah! I forgot to change my clock last night, so I was an hour off when I woke up, lol.


    7 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: glad to hear it! I’m great, thank you! :) Tired tho.... XD


    7 months ago
  • Zirong

    omg the rhymes, the OTTER part and the number part are amazing! This piece is so clever and well-written!


    7 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Hi, F’Otter! How you doin’?


    7 months ago
  • Nyla

    RE: Thank you so much for your kind words, my sister was so happy :) and yes, I was really proud of the descriptions :)


    7 months ago
  • Nyla

    Wow! This was quite profound! Using numbers was so cool and I've never thought of that! and I love, "Early bird gets the worm but it
    Receives the curse of the jealousy from others" because it's so true and a wonderful way to word it!


    7 months ago
  • Jason_claire :)

    That 12 was a very amazing and stunning end to a very creative and well thought-out poem :)


    7 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    also funny story: i moved some things from my message board to my bio. so i also moved "honey aunt". i just returned to my profile realising that i had retyped it as "hunny" *forehead slap* loll


    7 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    fo at his finest


    7 months ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    I love the OTTER part! This is so well written! <3


    7 months ago
  • mindfruit (semi-active)

    Oh wow this poem absolutely slaps F'Otter, amazing work. love all the little rhymes and that second stanza.


    7 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Woah... this is really awesome! I love it!!
    Hey, I’m going to the summit too! :D


    7 months ago
  • beth r.

    I love this so much! Lol the shark part
    re: aw thanks!!


    7 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    re: nighttttt


    7 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    re: FORGET MAYBE! MR. MINDFRUIT IS SPEAKING I AM GOING MOMCOMESIGNMYPERMISSIONTHINGNOW
    well then, see you there!


    7 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    re: actually I was thinking about it! Probably, but what about you?


    7 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    AHHH MY HEART I LOVE IT


    7 months ago