aaliyahh

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feelings
trying my best
wants to dance under the stars
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Message from Writer

feelings fade
when you refuse to set fire
to the little things.

-perry poetry
<3

and if only a girl could fly

March 9, 2021

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a contended and momentous moment will abide by us the time we fall in love
we'll fall in love within the clouds
dancing on air masses with evaporated sadness 
along the dense and uncontrollable emotion
that lets us love under starlights to hide the pain
that was once shown to the side of the world who couldn't heal
but to only have made it worse
tying a maddened rope around thy heart
of a young girl that wanted to be set free again
 

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2 Comments
  • Nyla

    Awww, your poems are so romantic but tragic! The ending is just ahhhh- I wanted to scream it was so sad whereas the beginning was so happy and you have a really amazing grasp of changing tone really well. " love under starlights to hide the pain" just *mwah* beautiful wording! RE: Awww thank you so so much!!! And ooooh that sounds soooo yummy!! Mine (ok, yes this is pretty basic) was cinnamon buns! They were just sooo gooey and yummy and sugary sweetness! They were absolutely amazing!! they do take a looong time to make though! ok, if you could have one superpower what would it be?


    6 months ago
  • journal.scribbles

    The amount of emotion you packed into this is incredible! I love all the strong word choice and symbolism. Nice job!


    7 months ago