"You are grand from your toes to your head. Take a deep breath and let that sink in."
Written By: Lata.B
March 9, 2021
PROMPT: March Grab Bag
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Wow! This is so powerful! I love how it starts off so pretty and beautiful and then it gets dark and the last line kind of leaves off so emotional! The beginning part seems to rhyme and then the ending is just there, like the shadows, just an extra- unwanted and I think that was just super powerful! RE: I'm glad you could relate to it :)
w o w this is insanely amazing. i love it, even the twist of darkness haha
damn! this is such a beautiful piece. it was all sunshine and it suddenly became a storm. i actually love the turn :)
umm i was wondering if you're attending the peer review seminar/ meeting? i actually signed up for it and wanted to know if there would be a familiar face there.
(i know i havent actually seen you. but you get the point ;)
let me know if ur coming! <3
this is really cool!!
re: Thank you, I hope you had good day too!
Haha that awesome! And usually what happens to me when I write something dark XD and did you mean to say claw at the end? Or clear? If you did mess up at least you didn’t mess up your name XD lol
re: I know right? I guess we both have a dark side we don't really know about haha
and thank you so much for the questions!!!
haha I feel like the same thing happens to me when I write--I'm always writing about crying for some reason?
Anyway, this poem really caught my eye! IT was so good! I loved it :)
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