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Okay first my heart! This is so sweet! Aww! Anyway XD I love how you introduced the MC background at the beginning, because it is really hard to do that and you did a wonderful job!
Maybe you could add a little bit more about the sister? Because all we know is that she is sick and might die
I love this! The romance and excitement and how well everything is written! I just love this to pieces and I’m going to go read the next chapter!