Shay

Malaysia

Dakshayini Ganeshraj
15
She/Her
Pansexual
Aspiring writer
Army
Gryffindor
Daughter of Poseidon
Lives , breathes, sleeps books
My fav WtW author: beth r.

Message from Writer

Back from hiatus. Can't wait to get back to writing. Stan Bangtan for clear skin.

Wedding Day

March 26, 2021

FREE WRITING

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Moving without getting any closer
Our bodies world apart
Dancing to the beat of our song

Painted smiles, glassy eyes 
"What a pretty pair! "
Compliments and congratulations coming from every corner escape your ears
Hands touching, but not hearts

Your body wrapped in silks
Flowing veil cover your dirty lies

Lips and heart not in sync
As words form in your mouth 
Words that cut deeper than an arrow to the heart 

I love you

You think your act can fool me
But I see through you
The same way you saw through me 
When you chose to toy with me 

Vows we exchanged
We will never keep 
Because your story doesn't end with me





This was my attempt at being poetic. Hope you guys like this. Feedback would be very much appreciated 

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9 Comments
  • V-Rose

    I finally finished a new chapter of Death's Tales! Yay! Here ya go!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/239514/version/510221


    3 months ago
  • V-Rose

    Hey! It only took forever but there's a new chapter of Death's Tales! Hope you like it and let me know what you think.
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/234069/version/496379


    5 months ago
  • rose.on.fire

    This is lovely! It's very well written.


    5 months ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    Oh woah...! This is so freaking beautiful!


    5 months ago
  • AstroWriter

    well, here are the chapters! I posted 3 of them since there were "overdue" lol. I really hope you read them!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/205940/version/476678
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/206812/version/476679
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/213358/version/476683


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Awesome!


    6 months ago
  • V-Rose

    Here's a chapter for Death's Tales!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/225423/version/475600


    6 months ago
  • Nyla

    That was really nice! And I loved the last line because that was such a quick and thought provoking way to end the story! The “you think you can act” stanza i has great rhythm! Anyways that’s all I have to say cause I’m really new to this but hope that helped! :)


    7 months ago
  • JonesyL123

    Amazing poem, this is so well written and the story was so thought-provoking. Keep writing :)


    7 months ago