psithurism

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she/her | christian
violist | nemophilist
est. 10/21/2020
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“All our souls are written in our eyes.”
-Edmond Rostand, Cyrano de Bergerac

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I. i offered my hand to the cosmos

March 3, 2021

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I. sun

she is gracious and bright, her presence
enables me to thrive and to grow, standing
near her i can feel the heat of the heartbeat
that fuels all, the life-force that pushes air
into my lungs and blood through my veins
her calm expression makes me feel at ease
but i am careful not to linger, for life and
power has the ability to burn and scar, so i
stay cautious and keep my distance, until i
am ready to walk arm in arm for eternity
 
Part one in a collection of space themed poems I will be publishing.

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9 Comments
  • Nyla

    Wowww I love this so much! Your poems always have a great sense of ending, and this one does but it also has a sense of continuation with "eternity". "life and
    power has the ability to burn and scar" was just so powerful. Ok, on my way to make it up to the latest piece in this collection because I am in love.
    Also, you are a really amazing writer, if you have time, would you be able to review my spoken word poem? "It hurts". I'd really appreciate it and if not, no worries at all. Hope you have a great day :))


    16 days ago
  • Busssy.Beee

    ahhhhhh!!! why haven't i stumbled across this earlier? this is just striking in any way possible!!


    about 1 month ago
  • Paisley Blue

    OH my KIWI you're AMAZING and your poems are AMAZING and this is freaking AMAZING ASDFJDGOIAHSFGDOFA howww omg

    i need to read more

    now

    now

    please

    i love this so much

    :D DSAFWQRJE:ORSAl


    about 2 months ago
  • pyrrhic

    SO FREAKING BEAUTIFUL OH MY GARFIELD


    about 2 months ago
  • dee’s abditory

    AMAZING INCREDIBLE AWESOME SHOWSTOPPING NEVER BEEN DONE BEFORE I LOVE IT YOU DARLING HUMAN


    about 2 months ago
  • wavewriter

    Wow. The whole piece from beginning to end was mesmerizing, especially that last line! Great job!

    Re: Thanks for your suggestion! I appreciate it so much! :)


    about 2 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Re: I agree. It's disgusting isn't it? But thank you very much <3


    about 2 months ago
  • BlueWolf (Semi Hiatus)

    Stunning piece! The use of words and descriptions are masterful!


    about 2 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Wow, this is utterly gorgeous. I can't wait to read more of this series.


    about 2 months ago