Lizzie R

United States

15
She/her
Virgo
Aspiring singer/songwriter
All of my songs are original unless specified as a rewrite in the title :)

"We promised no fixing." -Duplicity

Message to Readers

Any criticism would be amazing! Thank you :)

Luminescent

March 2, 2021

FREE WRITING

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How can someone be like you?
So sure, so pure, so honest
Everyone wants to be you
Or be with you instead

All the stars in the galaxy couldn't compare to you
Your luminescence lights up the world around you
Yet you don't seem to notice
You float above everything
In your own world
That everyone yearns to be a part of

If you could only see the affect you have on people
I'm sure you would beam with pride
You influence everyone without intending to
Your voice sweeter than honey
Your grace is that of a swan
You're the picture of perfection
But you don't see it

‚ÄčAll the stars in the galaxy couldn't compare to you
Your luminescence lights up the world around you
Yet you don't seem to notice
You float above everything
In your own world
That everyone wishes they could be a part of

I long to be in your world
The one full of hope and wonder
The one that makes you so kind and caring
Maybe it will make me that way too
Just a minute in your world is all I ask for

‚ÄčAll the stars in the galaxy couldn't compare to you
Your luminescence lights up the world around you
Yet you don't seem to notice
You float above everything
In your own world
That everyone wishes they could be a part of
Let someone in, show them how you do it
Or is it unachievable
And simply an ode to your flawless character 


 
My songs are getting really wordy...

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2 Comments
  • Parisienne

    Loving these wordy songs!!! Keep them coming :)
    RE: thank you so much! Yes, it's a fantastic piece - you needn't be worried about posting Lizzie - all your songs are stunning :D


    2 months ago
  • Ava Marie

    This is so beautiful, I love it so much!!!!!! Sorry, no criticisms, it sounded perfect to me!


    2 months ago