McK13

United States

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Hi! Thank you so much for checking out my piece! It's just a short poem about how I get stuck in my mind frequently. Nothing special, just my thoughts. Anyways, leave any feedback you want! Have a great day :)

rhymes

March 1, 2021

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My mind
Swirls with dozens of rhymes
From the simplest kind
Like ball, call or rang, bang
All the way to the words with complex definitions
Envision, transmission, or resplendently, insensibly
I wonder as I lay physically in my bed
Although I'm still full of energy in my head
And as I doze off to sleep 
I get lost in my thoughts, stuck in these dreams
How I get caught up so much 
These rhymes
They arrive pleasantly
In my imagination, they find refuge
And they're impossible to refuse 
My ideas spin out of control, taking over
I wish someone was there to patrol
This has to be a crime
Of some type, right?
If only I wasn't imprisoned by my own brain
Trapped without an escape

 

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2 Comments
  • Nyla

    Wow! I totally relate to this, my brain is always so swirled with ideas at night and wow, the ending is just sooo powerful and really packs a punch! great job :)) RE: Awwwww, thank you so so much for your sweet words! I absolutely loved them and you liked all the parts I liked of my poems so, you're obviously very intelligent! XD Looking at other people's comments I know you must be super caring and a great friend to have :))


    6 months ago
  • nolongeractive

    Re: Omg thank you so much, that means everything to me; your words and comments are absolutely the best!


    7 months ago