SamRose

United States

She/her
15
Ravenclaw
LDS
Fairykind
Homeschooler
Artist (learning)
Writer/Aspiring Author
Bookworm
Siberian Husky Owner (Sky)
Parakeet Owner (Haven)
Gerbil Owner (Fable)
Horseback Rider
Daughter of Athena
Joined 11/2020

Message from Writer

Currently working on two series:
*Kingdom on a Cloud
*The Other Side (collab w/VirginaTechGirl101)
Read them PLEASE! XD

Talk to me about Harry Potter, Percy Jackson, Fablehaven, Beyonders, Five Kingdoms, Anne of Green Gables, :)

After you're done here, go read my real-life friend BriRiley's writing! And my WtW friends Ava Marie and VirginiaTechGirl101! They are all super talented. :)

Proud member and Co-President of the Cult of the Crunch (ask (sk)eyesofocher for more info)

Don't hesitate to ask if you want a review, comment, whatever! I love getting to know all the awesome writers on here, and helping you any way I can!

Want to collab? Just let me know! I'd love to! :)

White (Revised based on Peer Review)

March 12, 2021

FREE WRITING

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White is paper unwritten
Soft belly of a kitten
Clouds in the sky so vast
Snow falling on the grass

White is canvas unpainted
White is thought untainted
The foam upon the sea
White is possibility
I got a peer review of this poem, and I have applied a couple of the notes here. What do you guys think? Is it better than the original? :)

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3 Comments
  • Draco Malfoy

    Love this. So simple but still so beautiful and sweet


    6 months ago
  • BriRiley

    i love how you added open this already great poem! You did a really good job! And the changes are beautiful! :D


    6 months ago
  • Nyla

    I love this so much!!! The rhyming is so beautiful and it's so simple yet powerful! Amazing! Re: awww, thank you so much for your kind words! You're an amazing writer as well :)


    6 months ago