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AAAH, definitely wasnt expecting this from the prompt haha. It is such a sober outlook on dreams, which is why the two last paragraphs hit so hard. I really hope you achieve your future and present dreams. I hope you make peace with the past ones.
I'm so curious about your perspective on art, how it behaves, how it's built. That, and memory.
I apologize thoroughly for any awkward sentences, I am very much sleep-deprived. However!!! I love the way you construct your setting, and especially the tone. It's really present??? I can hear your voice, is what I think I'm trying to say. I'll be checking out the rest of your work!! <3 Keep up the amazing pieces :)