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This story is so cute! I loved the whole thing, the idea, the way you wrote it, the title. The whole thing was beautifully written. I would love to own this bookstore!!!
Just the comments I added in highlighter. There wasn't one thing in particular that I would say you need to work on, you are very talented!!
This story was so good, and a pleasure to review. I hope you found this helpful, but just know that you don't have to take my suggestions if you don't want to. I hope you don't mind that I went a little hard on this piece, I know that I love it when people critique my work, and so I try my best to add as many suggestions as I can.
I can't wait to read more of your work, you are a very talented writer. Keep going!!!