Rival

United States

16
loves, dogs, music, and Writing
i am a self made songwriter and poet
i am a very stubborn person and i will stand up for what i believe no matter WHO fucking challenges me
and if you don't like me deal with it
i am my own biggest RIVAL

Message to Readers

Hi mom
'remember me bitch
of course you don't
the drugs were good for helping you forget

i don't even honestly know but its a rant

February 24, 2021

FREE WRITING

8
do you still believe?
in me 
if you turn around
and leave me now
wait what am i doing 
second guessing an apology
you put me through hell and im supposed to let you run free
and im talking to you mom if that wasn't clear to see
how THE F#@K can a mom leave her son for the wolves to eat
i want you to know that i will never forgive you
no not even for me
BECAUSE THESE GODAMN DEMONS WONT LET ME SLEEP!!!
do you know what its like
to look up to someone
when all they ever do is scream,fight,and lie
and lets talk about the chains and rope
i couldn't f@@king breath 
and you kept that shit up on my throat
you thought i would choke
but ill be damned and if that's what you want then i wont
and all you can do is sit there and hope 
that i leave the full story locked inside my soul
I WONT EVER LET IT GO!!!!!!!!
im losing control
of everything i fought for
and i want you to know
that ill die before i show love to my mom how's that for a low blow


 

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4 Comments
  • Ellington Stone

    This is the most powerful thing I've read, like, ever. The intensity is contagious, I can imagine the narrator on stage screaming with a tear-stained face. The punctuation and all-capped portions emphasize the emotions. It's really good, you're super talented.


    7 days ago
  • Figwit

    This is such a raw, emotional piece. Honestly, the power comes from the unfiltered feelings you express so well. <3


    about 1 month ago
  • ✧♬TwinklingLights♬✧

    this whole piece left me gasping for air, almost literally
    I'm here for you
    I'm sorry you had to go through this
    here. just come here.
    let me hold you. >--(`v`)--<
    it'll be okay
    if you ever need anything, you comment on one of my pieces, okay?
    sorry if I'm being too forward
    <3 sending love <3


    2 months ago
  • GraceWritesTheWorld

    The chain and rope around my throat bit, really hit me.


    2 months ago