abigail mclaughlin

United States

I am a eighth grader in the United States. Published author in "2018 Rising Stars Collection." Movie Director, Potterhead (slytherin),and bookworm. "There is no limit to what we, as women, can accomplish."-Michelle Obama.

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Hannah

Soul Alone

May 11, 2021

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I meet your eyes 
you don't even see me 
you hardly respond 
when i whisper 
hello 
could be my soulmate 
two kindred spirits 
maybe we're not 
i guess we'll never know 

My own mother 
you carried me in you 
now you see nothing 
but what i wear 
people ask you 
how am i doing 
you smile and nod 
don't let it end there 

Put me underneath God's sky 
and know me 
don't just see me with your eyes 
take away 
this mask of flesh and bone 
and see me 
for my soul 
alone 

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6 Comments
  • *wildflower*

    Re: Oh my gosh thank you so much for your comment that made my day so much better! :) And also I really love this poem. It’s so simple and so deep and true at the same time!


    8 days ago
  • Kasilee

    Oh my gosh this is so emotional and beautiful thank u!!!


    4 months ago
  • nolongeractive

    This is really deep and very interesting too, well done!


    7 months ago
  • kathryn siena

    this is extremely beautiful


    7 months ago
  • aaliyahh

    i love this so much, it has such a deep meaning <3


    7 months ago
  • nolongeractive

    This is such a lovely song.


    7 months ago