Lata.B

United States

"You are grand from your toes to your head. Take a deep breath and let that sink in."

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~Daughter Of Hades And Persephone~

“Of course it is happening inside your head, Harry, but why on earth should that mean that it is not real?” ― Albus Dumbledore

“May the odds be ever in your favor!”
― Suzanne Collins, The Hunger Games

<3

February 28, 2021

FREE WRITING

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I tell the sun my jokes
but 
I share my secrets with the moon 

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15 Comments
  • BriRiley

    Re: of course! I would love that! As long as you tell me when you publish it! XD


    2 months ago
  • happygiggles

    This is phenomenal. Such a beautiful way to look at life. I admire this piece a lot!

    Re- Thank you so much! I guess perfect people inspire you to write perfect comparisons. (:


    2 months ago
  • Jj101

    Aww yes<3


    2 months ago
  • SamRose

    Yes, totally! This describes the moon and sun exactly.


    2 months ago
  • Emi

    This is really pretty and kinda personifies the sun and moon exactly as I would imagine them to be.


    2 months ago
  • serein

    re: haha thanks! Yeah, honestly not sure how I'm going to do it I'm honestly kind of scared when I think of it lol (how can one be scared of ones own dreams gosh so weird XD)


    2 months ago
  • nolongeractive

    This is so good; it really made me smile...also, if you have time, I would love it if you would check out my new song 'the farm' - had to reupload it because people were commenting negative things even though it was about my grandmother who passed away, you will understand when you read it.


    2 months ago
  • serein

    oof this is lovely


    2 months ago
  • Mpm#1

    Ahhhhhhh this is beautiful!!!
    Re: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!


    2 months ago
  • BriRiley

    Oh my gosh! I love this soo much! I came here just to answer your Comment but I really like this!!!
    Re: That's awesome!! that sounds amazing! Do you like it? Being able to sleep XD Haha.


    2 months ago
  • McK13

    So much said with so few words!! Amazing and expressive :)

    Re: thank you!!


    2 months ago
  • mindfruit (hiatus)

    this is the epitome of short and sweet
    Re: thanks! glad you liked it :)


    2 months ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    wow. that was just... brilliant!


    2 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    (I’m in KY)


    2 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Wow.... this is amazing! So impactful, even though it’s short. I love it!
    Re: Aw, that sounds so fun! We got to sled here too!


    2 months ago