Peer Review by Michael O'Brien (United States of America)()

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Star Dust

By: Riley Noel

We are all bits of dust,
star dust in fact.
I guess that means,
we are all part of heaven

Message to Readers

Any comment for questions are encouraged. I am always looking to get better.

Peer Review

it surprises me that this piece of work is so simple yet it speaks to me

it leaves so much up to the interpretation of the reader

Reviewer Comments

very good, keep up the good work