Peer Review by Michael O'Brien (United States of America)()

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Star Dust

By: Riley Noel


We are all bits of dust,
star dust in fact.
I guess that means,
we are all part of heaven


Message to Readers

Any comment for questions are encouraged. I am always looking to get better.


Peer Review

it surprises me that this piece of work is so simple yet it speaks to me


it leaves so much up to the interpretation of the reader


Reviewer Comments

very good, keep up the good work