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Ok I had a lot of fun with this piece :D All the alliteration was absolutely awesome ;) Feedback would be awesome :D

Enjoy my little cultlets.

so are we a cult now?

February 23, 2021

FREE WRITING

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You're a writer? So you spend hours upon hours making up fake fantasies in your brain, and then share them with the rest of the world to critique and destroy? Are you in like a cult or something?

Well....not quite.

We squeeze the last drops of the sunset into our syllables. 
We paddle through crystal clear waters, to pour the purity into our paragraphs.
We soar to the moon and back, just so we can slip the stillness into our stanzas.
We race across the ocean, to re-gift the gentle rhythm to our readers.
We wander up the tallest cliffs, and weave the lively wind into our writing.



So...you're in a writing cult?


Well......I guess so.
 
Alliteration is awesome.

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26 Comments
  • ArtCat

    This is beautiful! It makes me want to join that cult! I'm working on a review, so hopefully it gets to you soon! XD


    6 months ago
  • Starlitskies

    Wow, this is so beautiful and ingenious! I absolutely love it! <3


    7 months ago
  • In Which Yaya Writes

    Ahaha hahahahaha, this is hularious!


    7 months ago
  • Ibex

    Pure genius, if you ask me. XD


    7 months ago
  • pyrrhic

    shhhhh..... ;]


    7 months ago
  • beth r.

    lol YES *laughs in wtw cult-ness* the italicized part is gorgeous!
    re: aw thank you!!! yes you better give me his numberrrr. omg you are so kind- YOU are freakishly talented :)


    7 months ago
  • resident philocalist

    re: YES YES YES YES YES FRIENDS FOREVER DO YOU HAVE A SNAPCHAT I FEEL LIKE WERE GONNA BE FOREVER FRIENDS THAT BONDED OVER CRUNCHY BROWNIES


    7 months ago
  • nolongeractive

    Re: Of course. I think that this might be one of the best pieces I have seen on this platform. It is so deep and meaningful in unexplainable ways, as it captivated with its descriptions of ordinary feelings that often aren't brought up in today's world. This is so lovely! Such relatable and special words. If you would like to review one of my songs, I would love more reviews on mine called 'butterfly sadness,' 'gatekeeper,' and 'motif.' Much love! Also, if you want editing or songwriting help [OR WANT TO COLLABORATE ON A SONG], please don't hesitate to reach out.


    7 months ago
  • resident philocalist

    Re: YES I WILL BRING FUDGY BROWNIES AND I WILL USE THE EDGE BROWNIE PAN BECAUSE EVERYONE KNOWS THE EDGES ARE THE BEST AND ALSO WELCH’S FRUIT SNACKS BECAUSE THAT STUFF IS SO GOOD ITS LIKE CRACK BUT KID-FRIENDLY


    7 months ago
  • nolongeractive

    This is so outstanding.


    7 months ago
  • barelybear

    *cackles in glee because the ending was my masterpiece*
    I’m very very glad you liked my piece and it was strangely relaxing searching youtube for the best adverts haha


    7 months ago
  • WrenBirdWrites

    This is awesome! I am glad to be a member of the writing cult Lol Re: Thank you, that really means a lot :')


    7 months ago
  • psithurism

    re: Ahh yes that seems to suit us quite nicely. XD


    7 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: You're welcome!


    7 months ago
  • barelybear

    Re: all great people do uwu

    The last scene of my brew off series is out! *beams*


    7 months ago
  • psithurism

    Oh we most definitely are a cult.


    7 months ago
  • useless :)

    okay back after rereading this five times cause it's so good and wow. it's really stunning. hehe writing cult.
    oh and re: tysm!! ahah ima go check out your dangers from the deep chapter now :D


    7 months ago
  • resident philocalist

    can i join your writing cult? we can do banishing rituals against writer's block and i'll bring the snacks.


    7 months ago
  • useless :)

    uhm. same question as anne blackwood had. how!?
    but like, that was so beautiful...i'm in awee


    7 months ago
  • Deleted User

    WOW. This is such a beautiful thing to read. Absolutely gorgeous.


    7 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    I mean
    "We race across the ocean, to re-gift the gentle rhythm to our readers."
    so clever


    7 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Hold up how is this both hilarious and gorgeous?!


    7 months ago
  • Alias 3

    Woah! Great job on this piece!


    7 months ago
  • aalawrites

    haha i guess i am in a cult lol


    7 months ago
  • barelybear

    Ahhh this is such an amazing description!!
    And, btw, cheesy is great, corny is great. Two of my favourite foods actually after chocolate and potatoes uwu
    :D


    7 months ago
  • astrea

    yes alliteration is awesome and your piece is too!


    7 months ago