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Name's Grace.
Brutally honest(apologies in advance).
Heckin weird.
-Elvin Warrior Wannabe-
Anime Crackhead/Reading addict/Aspiring poet/Potato
~Inner Turmoil~
Just a girl who wants to share what she has written.

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I write when inspiration hits.
Sometimes it just lightly taps me. Other times it hits me in the face with a chair.
I love to write. I would love any feedback you can give me!
I hope you enjoy reading what I've written. Because it brings me pure joy knowing that someone took the time to read it at all! :)

Here are some amazing writers to check out:
Anne Blackwood
Rohan's Defender
Ellington Stone
And there's so many more I didn't put here- gah!

Fun In The Sun Is Done.

February 22, 2021

Prompt: about something that you’ve had to leave behind (~wildflower~)

    Playful, peaceful, and happy days.
Spent in sunshine,
In the peach orchards,
And in the dandelion fields.
We ran, we danced,
We sang, the most ridiculous songs.
But then a cloud came and stormed.
Blocking the sun.
Scaring away all the fun.
This was no ordinary storm,
Or we'd have danced in the lovely kaleidoscope rainbows
That brought us so much fun,
Even more than the sun.
No, this storm was brought by the inevitable.
This was a storm brewed by my Mom.
She did not approve of you.
Though your heart was pure.
Your Father's was not.
Our families once friends.
Were now, arch enemies.
I was forbidden to see you.
I was caught,
I broke the rules.
They took me away from you.
So I guess, I left you behind.
So I am sorry, for the millionth time.
I am sorry.
My Dad and my friend's Father were cops. His father turned out to be a dirty cop(he was dealing). So I wasn't allowed to see him, due to my mom. She was worried that he would be a bad influence. Though, now that I'm older and I understand more. I never got to tell him goodbye, or why I never called. I still feel like I abandoned him...


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  • In Which Yaya Writes

    Oh my gosh, that sounds horrible! (Although that’s AMAZING that your dad is a cop! Tell him that some of us on WtW are so glad he’s doing that!) I don’t think you should feel like you abandoned him... That would be a really difficult decision for your mom to make. I feel like that would be terrible.
    This piece is really well-written, by the way. Great job!
    Replying: Oh, haha! Here I am telling you to check her out when you’re only here because of her XD. Still, she’s amazing.

    about 2 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    re: Yeahh! #WritingCultUnite! And re: ofc <3

    about 2 months ago
  • løne wølf [semi-hiatus]

    oh my gosh- i'm so sorry! i can't imagine what you've gone through, and what you're still going through. i send out my best wishes to you and your family <3

    re: thank you for your kind words! and of course, you can sing it as a song :) if you want, you can record it and send it to me; i'll be happy to listen! <3

    about 2 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Aw, I'm sorry this happened. I know it must've been heartbreakingly confusing. I hope this piece helped you get closure. If you want, you can send a paragraph text my way to get it all off your chest.

    about 2 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Hiatus)

    Re: thank you so much! :) Have a great day!

    about 2 months ago
  • Alias 3

    Such a suspenseful and heart capturing story. I love the direction you've taken this prompt and you're writing *chefs kiss* :)

    about 2 months ago