crow_e

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23 neurotic crows in a recycled flesh suit
lee | he/they | 18 | intp-t | lgbtq+
est. march '20
CA alum summer '20
poetry and spoken word competition winner '20
wtw review issue 2.2
peer review summit facilitator march '21
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Message from Writer

guess i'm here again?

etude, after six months

February 22, 2021

FREE WRITING

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i wouldn’t call it a “falling out of love”;
that implies that i noticed
i was drifting away

i wouldn’t call it “burnout” either;
that implies there was a fire, once
burning hot and angry in my chest.

it’s more like
“the storm has passed,” there is no
static building up in the clouds

anymore. when lightning strikes it
never strikes the ground.
i haven't written poetry since mid 2020 and it shows

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7 Comments
  • beth r.

    if by "it shows" you mean "this piece is dripping in gorgeous metaphors and stunning imagery" then ye it shows.
    seriously this is great


    2 months ago
  • aaliyahh

    oh wow, i love this so much. :) has a lot of emotion


    2 months ago
  • _Delphiruns2theocean_

    Re: Thank you, and yeah it really sucks. Last time I actually tried keeping my grades really low key and I'm ashamed of that :( I just emailed the school counselor (yet again) about a follow up on how it's going, and I'm waiting for a reply.


    2 months ago
  • Toikupu~estVehementChirography

    Static clouds.... yeah mate, you're doing just fine on the poetry scale.


    2 months ago
  • ✧♬TwinklingLights♬✧

    coolio!


    3 months ago
  • GraceWritesTheWorld

    Even so, having not written poetry for so long. This is really good! I can really understand this. <3


    3 months ago
  • xx carolina xx

    oof - i feel you. my poetry is pretty rusty, too. i love this, though.


    3 months ago