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The issue at hand is very serious. People are dying and we need to do something about it. The facts are very alarming 😱
I had no idea that so many people committed suicide.
Just some punctuation mistakes!
The issue has been written about very cleverly, and addresses the problem in a respectful way. They also use very sophisticated vocabulary which creates a very good atmosphere for the speech!
Very good work, it was fun to read!!