BizzleWrites

Australia

I'm Issy.
I'm 14 and an aspiring artist and author.
She/her
Black Lives matter.
Likes:
Bi puns
Murder mystery TV shows
Art
Shakespeare poetry
Dislikes:
I can't even be bothered writing them all down
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Goodbi
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Longing

February 21, 2021

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How we find ourselves longing
Oh, for a whisper from their frozen lips
To see a single shadow cast 
By a sweet love, before the season tips
How we desire a single day to see them
Before winter sets in 
Before another year begins
To love them wholly with ourselves, therein 
And yet another burning day turns over
And night falls crisp and dark as the deepest lake
In its midst, a child, in a world bleak
Wishing for some lovely talk in to partake
And I'm the child, with eyes murky and longing
For my love, for a friend I'll never loose
But where or who or when, I do not yet know
So I leave my feelings burried
Beneath a foot of snow

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2 Comments
  • useless :)

    i love this!! i completely agree with sophia, the line she quoted is absolutely beautiful, and "so i leave my feelings buried/beneath a feet of now" wraps it up perfectly. also, i love your writer's message <3


    3 months ago
  • Sophiascb

    Love this! The line, " a whisper from their frozen lips" is simple and beautiful. I also really love the ending, tying it together really well with the entire theme and tone of the piece.


    3 months ago