Vista of Grace

United States

Slytherin / Erudite
Spirit of a Cheetah
Child of Apollo

I am both ENTJ and ENTP at 51% and 49% for either. I have a mix of religion but all humans should be equal. It is my goal in life to make them so.

Message from Writer

Hello! I am a proud Slytherin, fan of Hunger Games, Harry Potter, Divergent, Percy Jackson and a bunch of unknown books. Hope you and your family are safe during these crazy times, stay safe. Please check out my work, I have a few based on my fandoms if your in them as well.

- Love your favorite Slytherin

"She wears darkness well. This girl has always been half goddess, half hell."

"Nobody looks good in their darkest hours. But it's those hours that make us what we are."

"We'll never be truly free until those in bondage have the same rights as you and me."

"God help and forgive me, I want to build something that's going to out live me."

"Hope is the only thing stronger than fear"

Broken and Built

February 28, 2021


Oh let the grass feed my senses 
Oh let the ore fill my expenses
Oh let the sky spill into my eyes 
Oh let the clouds clean my lies

Oh may the dirt crumble into me
Oh may the vines hold detangle me
Oh may  the ink write my story 
Oh may the clouds mold my glory
Oh may the sea clean my pain
Oh may the rain clear my vein

Oh the water rips my edges
Will tear me to the ground
Oh the dirt dissembles me
Will toss me to the wolf
Oh the wolves bend my skeleton 
Will toss me to the sky
Oh the sky drops me on my core
Will drag me to the grass

Oh the grass chips my heart
Will transfer me to the ore
Oh the ore runs me through the gut
Will leave me to the ocean
Oh the ocean fills my lungs
Will leave me to the ink

Oh the ink is the one who stops
She walks me to land and takes me ashore
So I sit upon the shells of my birth 
Broken and Built
My own decision whether to rebuilt the broken
Or break the built 

They built me up
Then they tore me down
To see if they raised a pup
Or someone who couldn’t drown


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  • February 28, 2021 - 7:29am (Now Viewing)

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  • ArtisticCatbird2020

    I know this piece is pretty old, but I stumbled across your profile and those first few lines drew me in! I love the "old but glorious" tone -- it fits perfectly with the title and theme.

    This poem is great; I couldn't help commenting. :)

    about 2 months ago
  • Ava Marie

    You have no idea how much I love this!

    3 months ago