Ava Marie

Canada

Hi I'm Ava
15
She/Her

Aspiring Author
Dancer
Rock Climber

Always laughing
Beatlemaniac
Favourite book: The Book Thief by Markus Zusak
Bad jokes are the best!
I draw occasionally
I love constructive criticism!

Joined: 11/14/2020

Message to Readers

There's no reason or story behind this piece, it just randomly popped into my head one day years ago and I decided to post it just for fun. Hope you like it

Poem Thing

February 19, 2021

FREE WRITING

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If a butterfly stands alone in a field of honey,
It will die because it is alone,
And there is no one there to save it.
I came up with this randomly two years ago and I just stumbled across it and thought; why not? 

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11 Comments
  • nolongeractive

    This is outstanding and your words just are so lovely and simple, and the title really snatches the reader!


    2 months ago
  • Nyla

    Awww, this was sad but poetic and I feel like you could analyze this a million different ways- which adds to its greatness! This is really nice! RE: Thank you!


    2 months ago
  • astrea

    re: thank you!


    2 months ago
  • Booklover12

    The amount of emotion that this piece filled me with is incredible. In gives off such a thought provoking vibe with so few words!

    Re: Thank you so much! :)


    3 months ago
  • Avril

    Wow this is short but powerful. "It will die because it is alone." Very thought-provoking! I think you could go even further with this: maybe turn it into a longer piece of poetry or a short story even.


    3 months ago
  • Livsnjutare

    I like this too!! It's so beautiful!


    3 months ago
  • Madelyn (Carolina Girl)

    As a tribute to wonderful followers like you I have started the series about my life. Please check it out, enjoy and give suggestions.


    3 months ago
  • Lata.B

    OoOoo I like this!


    3 months ago
  • _Delphiruns2theocean_

    Nice piece!
    Re: Thank you so much!


    3 months ago
  • ✧♬TwinklingLights♬✧

    woooah nice piece!
    also thanks for the review!


    3 months ago
  • Toikupu~estVehementChirography

    Exactly the unreachable point: why not? Ethic!


    3 months ago