gabimarie

United States

~ 16 ~
she/her/hers
occasional nerd
future songwriter

Message to Readers

enjoy :)

saved is a state of mind

February 19, 2021

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you can take all of me
because I can’t be saved
leave me here
in a broken grave
because you can’t be saved
never let me go
you can’t walk away
even though I can’t be saved
every day it always rains
blue winds and grey skies
but you can’t be saved
in my lucid dreams
I see you smile
but I can’t be saved
you see the stars shine in my eyes
and you laugh at my crinkled nose
yet you can’t be saved
you were in my head
I was in your heart
we were holding each other
neither of us saved
but both of us
safe

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  • Just_A_Memory

    The repetition of "can’t be saved" is fabulous in this piece! Comforting ending, but overall melancholy, imo. But the combination makes for the best stories <3 <3


    3 months ago