Julie L

United States

Message to Readers

I discovered this contest a few hours ago and, as singing is one of my hobbies, I decided to try my hand at writing a song lyrics. I only managed this short lullaby and don’t expect to win, however, I am hoping for feedback. All feedback is encouraged; thank you!

love, love

February 16, 2021


sleep, love,
close your eyes and
dream, love,
spoil yourself with your
own, love,
stand alone

live, love,
a fantasy far far
away, love,
and harm shall not come to your
days, love,
drift away

turn from reality
trust me, my darling
i have seen things you have not
so

if, love,
you heed my suggestion, you
will, love,
endure much less suffering
love, love,
please don’t wake

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3 Comments
  • thea_ivy

    I absolutely adore this and your voice is beautiful, amazing job!


    3 months ago
  • Lizzie R

    Also, your voice is so pretty!!!


    3 months ago
  • Lizzie R

    This is amazing!! I love it so much! Good luck in the competition :))


    3 months ago