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February 17, 2021

FREE WRITING

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VERSE 1:

I question my place in this world
and whether I deserve all that I have. 
Four people, all hold up my walls 
and keep me going strong.
But still, oh, but still, I'm trying to 
keep myself from falling into the 
spirals of doubt. 
But still, oh, but still..

VERSE 2:

If I could shout every boy and every girl,
I would tell them to stand, and link their 
upreaching hands and say..
oh, I would say, please, let's give
a toast to us, raise every glass and
every cup, and let's sing of all we've 
overcome. 

Chorus: 
So let's sing and let's rejoice
for the power to come together as 
one voice, and keep each other 
close. 
And for those who are on the 
cusp of drowning in doubt, 
take my hand, I'll help you out. 


VERSE 3: 
I often question my place in this world
My place alongside every boy and every girl, 
and whether I deserve all that I have, 
as I try to keep myself from falling 
into the endless spiral of doubt..

VERSE 4:
..I only hope, oh I only hope, 
someone will take my hand and
help me out.
 
This isn't for the songwriting competition. I just wanted to try my hand at songwriting. I know it sucks, lol.

 

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2 Comments
  • anemoia (#words)

    ok, no, it actually doesn't suck. i really like the message. it's real and honest, yet hopeful. i like "And for those who are on the
    cusp of drowning in doubt,
    take my hand, I'll help you out" because it shows that even tho you might be drowning in doubt yourself, or once were, you can see past it to help those like you.


    3 months ago
  • _Delphiruns2theocean_

    Re: Thanks :) btw I love the new pfp :)


    3 months ago