Lizzie R

United States

15
She/her
Virgo
Aspiring singer/songwriter
All of my songs are original unless specified as a rewrite in the title :)

"Poetry is the past that breaks out in our hearts." - Rilke

Message from Writer

I love to write songs. Yes, a lot of my songs are sad. I write when I get inspired or I need to vent an emotion. Most of the time the emotion I need to vent is negative. Writing music is cathartic and it makes me happier than anything else in the world. Please feel free to leave any comments on any of my songs. Criticism of any kind is welcomed with open arms. Thank you so much. I hope you all are doing well :)

Thank You

February 15, 2021

FREE WRITING

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We’ve only talked a few times but I already know the real you
You hurt people verbally and physically
Without a care in the world
You’re selfish and inconsiderate and can’t seem to see it

Fathers are supposed to be good
They’re supposed to care 
But you don’t know how to care for anyone but yourself
You’re the reason for so many of my issues 
And I’ve never even met you

Thank you so much for being the reason for my self hatred
Thank you for making me doubt myself
Thank you for making me clingy but distant 
You really are outstanding at putting everyone down
And you never care how your words and actions impact others

You would think you would be capable of loving your daughter 
But it’s been 15 years and you still can’t do a thing
I wrote you a four page letter
You responded with four sentences
So at this point I just don’t care

Thank you so much for being the reason for my self hatred
Thank you for making me doubt myself
Thank you for making me clingy but distant 
You really are outstanding at putting everyone down
And you never care how your words and actions impact others

You said you wished you’d never had a child
Well guess what
You don’t 
You’ve never done a thing for me so you’re not a parent
Looks like your wish has been granted 
You didn’t even need a genie

Thank you so much for being the reason for my self hatred
Thank you for making me doubt myself
Thank you for making me clingy but distant 
You really are outstanding at putting everyone down
And you never care how your words and actions impact others

The plethora of doubt you have made me feel over the years hurts
But I’m done succumbing to that 
I’m done with you
Thank you

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5 Comments
  • _Delphiruns2theocean_(hiatus)

    Re: Thank you, I appreciate that <3


    4 months ago
  • _Delphiruns2theocean_(hiatus)

    Re: Thanks. I'm hoping I don't lose the friendship, because all the evolving our peers have done has never affected us, but now it is and for some reason I feel a bit left out I'm not caught up in all of that. I know it's good not to be, or maybe not, but it's tempting.


    4 months ago
  • WrenBirdWrites

    Re: Ahh thanks so much! You made me cry a little Lol :')


    4 months ago
  • WrenBirdWrites

    Powerful. Hits me close to home. <3


    4 months ago
  • _Delphiruns2theocean_(hiatus)

    Re: Oh okay. Thank you for the thoughts and advice, I'm currently up in the snow for the first time in 2 years so maybe that will clear my head up :)


    4 months ago