Lizzie R

United States

15
She/her
Virgo
Aspiring singer/songwriter
All of my songs are original unless specified as a rewrite in the title :)

"We promised no fixing." -Duplicity

Message from Writer

I love to write songs. Yes, a lot of my songs are sad. I write when I get inspired or I need to vent an emotion. Most of the time the emotion I need to vent is negative. Writing music is cathartic and it makes me happier than anything else in the world. Please feel free to leave any comments on any of my songs. Criticism of any kind is welcomed with open arms. Thank you so much. I hope you all are doing well :)

Thank You

February 14, 2021

FREE WRITING

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We’ve only talked a few time but I already know the real you
You hurt people verbally and physically
Without a care in the world
You’re selfish and inconsiderate and can’t seem to see it

Fathers are supposed to be good
They’re supposed to care 
But you don’t know how to care for anyone but yourself
You’re the reason for so many of my issues 
And I’ve never even met you

Thank you so much for being the reason for my self hatred
Thank you for making me doubt myself
Thank you for making me clingy but distant 
You really are outstanding at putting everyone down
And you never care how your words and actions impact others

You would think you would be capable of loving your daughter 
But it’s been 15 years and you still can’t do a thing
I wrote you a four page letter
You responded with four sentences
So at this point I just don’t care

Thank you so much for being the reason for my self hatred
Thank you for making me doubt myself
Thank you for making me clingy but distant 
You really are outstanding at putting everyone down
And you never care how your words and actions impact others

You said you wished you’d never had a child
Well guess what
You don’t 
You’ve never done a thing for me so you’re not a parent
Looks like your wish has been granted 
You didn’t even need a genie

Thank you so much for being the reason for my self hatred
Thank you for making me doubt myself
Thank you for making me clingy but distant 
You really are outstanding at putting everyone down
And you never care how your words and actions impact others

The plethora of doubt you have made me feel over the years hurts
But I’m done succumbing to that 
I’m done with you
Thank you

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3 Comments
  • _Delphiruns2theocean_

    Amazing! I may be overstepping boundaries, you don't have to comply in this, but I hope it's not based off of true events, if so you're an amazing person and you seem to be doing just fine on your own!
    Re: Just a tip, if you want to reply to a comment go to the person who commented latest piece and write "re" or "reply" so they get a notification. Also, thank you it means a lot!


    3 months ago
  • Lizzie R

    Thank you so much


    3 months ago
  • The Elephant In The Room

    Beautiful. I can feel your raw emotion in this piece


    3 months ago