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I'd love to get peer reviews and know what you think about this song!
It made me think of a warm, joyous day filled with the wonders of nature. The song is too short to appreciate the journey you're taking us on
'just a bundle of twigs' section has a lovely rhyme scheme. It really emphasises the light heart, warm feeling the song gives
You could implement more verses and lengthen the song further, perhaps using different dynamics and pitch you add to the feel of flying through the air.
Its a lovely idea, mellow and calming imagery of flight and nature. Keep in mind the ideas you're talking about in the song.
Perhaps in the verses you could talk about different things you see whilst flying