Isla Hutchins

United Kingdom

15
(she/her)
I make music & write a bit :)

Message to Readers

Hi! I’d love some feedback on what other people think about this piece, I’ve recorded, mixed and mastered it all myself and think it would definitely be great to get some opinions on it! :)

The darling kite (with recording)

February 14, 2021

https://m.soundcloud.com/isla-hutchins/the-darling-kite

A bundle of twigs,
Tied together with string,
Wrapped in soft cotton,
Acts like a wing.

Off to the runway,
With the rush of the breeze,
She’s up and away,
Floating above the trees.

So come on darling,
Let’s fly through the air,
Let’s fly through the air,
Soar the sky with no care,
We’ll give the clouds the last word,
When we’re off with the bluebirds,
Off with the bluebirds,
Their song, will be heard.

She’s filled with grace,
In every way,
The darling glider twirls,
A magnificent display,

Just a bundle of twigs,
Tied together with string,
Wrapped in soft cotton,
Acts like a wing,

So come on darling,
Lets fly through the air,
Lets fly through the air,
Soar the sky with no care,
We’ll give the clouds the last word,
When we’re off with the bluebirds,
Off with the blue birds,
Their song, will be heard.

 

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5 Comments
  • Ree Sethu

    beautiful! lovely lyrics and stunning vocals!


    4 months ago
  • SunV

    Wow! This sounds like a professionally produced song. Your harmonies are on point, and the lyrics are beautiful. Brilliant!

    Welcome to WtW!


    4 months ago
  • Isla Hutchins

    incase anyone's wondering- I've recorded everything myself using logic pro :)


    4 months ago
  • ArtisticCatbird2020

    Your recording sounds professional?!! (Your voice is beautiful~)

    Such a peaceful, wholesome piece. Reminds me of warm, golden afternoons. Especially the ending -- agh I miss summer...


    4 months ago
  • rosewrites

    Ah! I love this! The harmonies are so perfect for the feel of the song, you’re voice is amazing, I especially love it one the chorus. The guitar sounds amazing (I don’t know if it’s you or not) and I love the whole thing so much!


    4 months ago