Sophiascb

United States

i'm blonde but surely not dumb. ♥
i am the accumulation of my inspirations and everything i ever thought was cool.
est. january 10, 2k21
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striving to inspire ;)

i love shadowhunters, tog, neal shusterman works, and am a ravenclaw

i love lorde, gracie abrams, and am a swiftie <3

i dance and cheer

published in flare journal and burn magazine @ boston university

happy reading, my work, and the lovely brains of others ;)

a disappointed heart

February 13, 2021

FREE WRITING

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When it rains on a Tuesday
And I wasn’t prepared
So my sneakers get soaked 
While the sky stays gray
Standing up out of a wheelchair
After years absent of steps
And collapsing in exhaustion
All hope left bare
An objection from the one you left behind
Cuts a wonderful and wild wedding cake
And the piercing pain of uncertainty 
That has never quite left your mind
They seem like extraordinary gifts at first
And then it falls down a rabbit hole
With no end to the beginning
Begging for a disappointed heart to burst 
ok I really don't know if I like the rhyme scheme here, and this is kind of out of my comfort zone, writing about things that I haven't experienced. It felt weird, like I was viewing through opera glasses. lmk if you like. and what the heck should I name it? 

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  • Starlitskies

    Gosh, I love this! It's beautiful how it grasps at something and nothing at the same time. I especially love the lines:
    "An objection from the one you left behind
    Cuts a wonderful and wild wedding cake" - There's something intriguing and intense about this.
    And for a name: how about drawing inspiration from the most prominent emotion you felt when writing this. I think you'll find something there.
    Re: Thank you so much! The line about my dimple is my favourite too! <3


    7 months ago
  • _Delphiruns2theocean_

    Re: Yay! Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the follow :)


    7 months ago