FantasyOtter12

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*Est. 7/6/20*
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Message to Readers

Yes the series is back!!!!

Thanks to barelybear for the word 'Potato' to start this piece!

Sorry if I didn't pick your word, you can suggest another one in the comments if you'd like :)

Rhymes With 'Potato'

February 16, 2021

FREE WRITING

30
I was eating a potato

With a tomato

And some cookie dough.

While I was walking I stubbed my toe

And banged my elbow.

Sadly, it will hurt until tomorrow.

I just realized though,

This whole piece could've fit under the title "Rhymes With Scorpio'".



 
Yea you can tell how little effort I could manage to put into this... anyhow, hope everyone reading this is having a great day!

Series!! 
"Rhymes With 'Implode'"
"Rhymes With 'Cognate'"
"Rhymes With 'Ink'"
"Rhymes With 'Harpsichord'"
"Rhymes With 'October'"
"Rhymes With 'Halloween"'
"Rhymes With 'Scorpio'"
"Rhymes With 'Holiday'"

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49 Comments
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Hey! Just wanted to let you know that if you wanna get mindfruit to forward it, I sent out another email about the virtual summer camp!


    2 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Hilarious lol :P Re: ty!


    3 months ago
  • Booklover12

    This is so good! It definitely brought a smile to my face. :)

    Re: Thank you so much!


    3 months ago
  • BriRiley

    Haha! This is super funny XD and it’s so cool that they picked your promt for the grab bag!


    3 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Re: aww, thank you so much! :) Hope you’re well too, F’Otter! :) And the new mindfruit quote.... XD


    3 months ago
  • nolongeractive

    This is so cool


    3 months ago
  • Sophiascb

    This is really funny lol.
    Just wanted to lyk that I used your prompt in the grab bag! It was really fun!


    3 months ago
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    Replying: ......
    IT IS! But I love every second of it! (most of the time)


    3 months ago
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    Replying: uhhh how do you know? Psychic Mindfruit back at it? XD


    3 months ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    Re: Dude, I don't know either xD I just like the meaning behind it Hehe


    3 months ago
  • Toikupu~estVehementChirography

    Yes I must read more of these series!


    3 months ago
  • ~rain~

    This is just brilliant. Absolutely amazing *applause* I'll have to read more of these!!
    Re: Red Robin is so good but then Chick-Fil-A... Chick-Fil-A is like, a gift from God. And yeah, poor Joe.


    3 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Re: lol, really? XD Idk how I keep doing getting those stories out of him... XD


    3 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    oh love this! the tie to "rhymes with scorpio" was perfect XD

    anyways, heres a link to chpt 30 for T&R
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/218916/version/457602

    (i had a typo in my prev comment)


    3 months ago
  • barelybear

    Re: haha thanks. Btw they used mindfruit’s review as an exemplar like hey guys do this lmao. Slightly scary how good he is I would love to know him in person! And thanks for telling me that. The hunting is hard, trying to find a piece that looks challenging and interesting.


    3 months ago
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    Replying: Ahhahaha, LUCKY!!! I'm gonna ask him what the lottery numbers are for the JACKPOT!!! ;) SOOOOO MANY ways this can go AWESOME! Maybe I should ask him if I'll have a future as maybe not a failed writer? XD


    3 months ago
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    Replying: Just did some digging and apparently, MINDFRUIT IS A PSYCHIC HAHAHAHHAHAHAH! XD


    3 months ago
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    Replying: Wait, which ones? Sorry, I'm a little confused. Will you tell me the titles? And I comment because I want to, not because I feel obligated to! XD
    Also, YES IM GOING TO FIGURE OUT MY NEW PROFILE PIC! I have the perfect idea in mind mwahahhahahahaha!


    3 months ago
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    Replying: I've been great! Thank you! Anyway, alright, then three or more pieces you'd like me to read and comment on? <3


    3 months ago
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    Replying: Ahahahha, smh. Now, I'm worried. Gotta go question him! <3
    And thanks! I'm glad to be back! How are you?
    Also, I'd love to review three or more of your pieces? Will you let me know which ones? Thanks! XD


    3 months ago
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    These just keep getting better and better!
    Replying: Lol, how did you notice I was back? XD


    3 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Re: I’m great thank you! :) It’s a snow day here! The first really significant on in several years actually! And yeah, mindfruit’s really awesome! And so are you :)
    Ha! Yes, that show was great, and very educational!


    3 months ago
  • one hundred forty-seven | ISFP writer

    This is so funny! A very unique brand of funny! Bravo to you!


    3 months ago
  • Zirong

    This is so interesting XD


    3 months ago
  • løne wølf [semi-hiatus]

    re: i think i like fries too :P


    3 months ago
  • løne wølf [semi-hiatus]

    p o t a t o

    (speaking of which, what's your favorite potato cooking style? fries, mashed, baked, etc.?)


    3 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Btw, how are you doing?
    (And I kept kinda cracking up last night from your comment; mindfruit comes up with some pretty clever rhymes, doesn’t he?) :)


    3 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Re: lol, yes he did! XD


    3 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    Hey F'Otter-It's lin! I know I haven't been active, but I needed an unexpected break--one that I will return from on the third. Happy Valentines,
    ~lin


    3 months ago
  • Busssy.Beee

    xD but the real question is: was the potato + tomato + cookie dough good? hmm...haha
    love love love these poems :D


    3 months ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    YES this series is hilariously creative


    3 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Thank you!!!


    3 months ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    Love it xD


    3 months ago
  • Narnia Zelda

    this was funny, lol


    3 months ago
  • barelybear

    Re: Hey mum, FantasyOtter likes my chord progression! :p
    Why thank you :D


    3 months ago
  • beth r.

    re: oop no that doesn't make sense i'm december-


    3 months ago
  • beth r.

    re: oop didn't see that lol
    i'm a pisces and i'm not sure how that makes me feel lol


    3 months ago
  • beth r.

    you're a Scorpio aren't you lol


    3 months ago
  • ANSON REYNOLDS

    I'm just gonna go binge read these... bc they're fabulous.... :P


    3 months ago
  • McK13

    This is awesome! Your entire serious is hilarious :) Word suggestion — Barbecue


    3 months ago
  • Emma R.S.

    This is really funny! Thank you for welcoming me to WtW, I hope to make a lot of friends on here!


    3 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    ahhhhhhh i love this so muchhhhhh
    word suggestion: jellyfish


    3 months ago
  • barelybear

    Fame*
    barelybear getting too carried away there lmao


    3 months ago
  • barelybear

    Aw I absolutely adore this!! I’m so happy that there is some game being brought to my favourite food c: (rip tomahto XD)
    Re: thanks haha at the moment I’m just a little teensy weensy bit really really excited haha. Had to say goodbye to the squirrel for a bit though.
    You decided not to apply this time right? I completely agree with mindfruit lel. I haven’t done much yet, but I think it will be a really great experience.


    3 months ago
  • SunV

    Okay, this is hilarious XD. Maybe you can make a compilation: of both potato and scorpio?


    3 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    What about the word “chocolate”?


    3 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Hahahaha, ohhh, it never gets old! XD


    3 months ago
  • nolongeractive

    This is way too good.


    3 months ago
  • dee’s abditory

    This is amazing and it made me smile :) have a good day because you just made mine :))


    3 months ago