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Hey, guys! I hope you love this new song!
The vibe it gave off was super chaotic but also tranquil. There are parts where I imagined the song (if it's a song) speeding up and parts where I imagined it slowing down. I also liked the overall metaphor, I think it was worked in really well and seemed like good fit. I also loved how you added in a bunch of questions. I think this definitely added a layer of meaning to the story. It shows that the narrator is confused and going through something difficult. We don't have to know what that is to feel bad for them.
The only thing I can think is word-choice. There were parts that were somewhat vague, even though I kind of liked that. It just seems inconsistent. For example: "Do not disrespect your heart Hearing what it needs, ignoring all its pleas" This part is straightforward. "Burned in the night Tortured by fright" This part isn't as straightforward. I love every line, and I understand them all, but just an FYI. Other than that, it's really good!!
This truly is incredible, well done!! You are SUPER talented, and I can't wait to hear these to music!! :)