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the art of deception

February 11, 2021

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her nimble fingers move expertly, as she weaves
each beautiful melody of deceit into her intricate, fragile web of lies.
entranced, you watch her pull at the strings of your heart,
as she meticulously spins them into your intertwined tale of broken love. 
the window you dazedly glance through life is fogged though, you are blinded.
you do not see her cruel laugh, as for her, this is mercy.
for her, manipulation is more sensible than the treachery of truth.
she takes pity on your helpless soul, making sure to ever so preciously
feed you her honey-like, delusional fabrications, which reach
far beyond the clutches of reality. they are glazed over
with a layer of velvety richness, as she knows this will always leave you craving more.
after all, you are human...flawed, naïve, and prone to blind love. a perfect victim.
she now glances up from her task, and alluringly whispers three words through the glass, 
words you would have waited eternities to bask in, only to hear from her.
i love you
they are woven with silks of a tantalizing shade of gold,
spoken with not an ounce of compassion, but adorned with flattery in its most 
majestic form. you do not see this of course, as they send an enchanting
thrill up your spine, leading you further down into the inescapable pit
of desire. though you do not know it, outsiders feel sorrow for you,
as they have slowly watched your mind become a senseless void of yearning.
nothing else matters while you long for her.
for her, the embodiment of your greatest desires, although it is merely an illusion.
for her, who walks with an aura of gorgeous allure, 
although it is only because she is not mortal. no, she is unrestrained and not confined to the corners
of sanity. she is meticulous and patient in a beautifully malicious way.
she is deception.





 
had the first two lines in my drafts...i guess i was starting something but forgot about it. anyway, i decided to finish it now

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7 Comments
  • Nyla

    This was absolutely awesome! I thought it was just going to be a beautifully descriptive piece being all romantic and then the ending just added this whole other layer to it with the "she is deception". I mean wow!! I could totally imagine the whole thing happening.

    RE: Thank you so so much for your comment- your support means a lot. I’m so glad it came across as powerful and wow, thank you!! :))
    Of course! Thank you- hope you have a great day too :D


    6 months ago
  • _Delphiruns2theocean_

    More is here!!! New chapter of A "Real" Girl has been published! Check my profile for it :)


    8 months ago
  • Awesome Sienna

    Re: Thank you so much for your comment. Its nice to get someone else's point of view. I'll change a couple of things, so it makes more sense.


    8 months ago
  • _Delphiruns2theocean_

    Re: Yay! For sure! Glad you're enjoying it, stay tuned! :)


    8 months ago
  • Spade

    This is great!

    Also, I just finished chapter two of The Corrector if you want to pop over and read it.


    8 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Re: Tysm!


    8 months ago
  • remi'sgotinkstains

    omg this is so beautiful and true and honest and . . . WOW. well done, scribble chum! ;) and thank you so much for the lovely comment! it means a lot. all the love, sc!


    8 months ago