Awesome Sienna

Australia

[ChildOfGod]
ENFP
15
Girl
Writer
Reader
Artist
Use to be dancer
Christian
Home schooler
Soccer player
Actor wanna-be
Beach lover
Animal lover
Dramatic
Unorganized
Spontaneous
Some people call me crazy!

Message to Readers

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The Animal Rebellion

March 16, 2021

FREE WRITING

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Once upon a time there was a land
Where all the animals took a stand,
They where sick of being bossed and bullied,
They thought it was time the humans said sorry,
They came and marched into Town Square
The bat, the cod, even the bear,
They made a plan to put a ban
So that no man could ever or can
That they were worthless, just a dog,
That they were useless, just a frog,
So they shouted at the top of their voices
That they thought it was time they made there own choices
The bird could flit, the horse could trot
And no one would say they could not
Then the people of the town came out and said,
'Is this all real or are we asleep in bed?'
All the animals grunted in despair, 
And one by one started to tear at their hair,
'They'll never get it, they're stupid as can be,
Though it's easy to see, we're not happy as can be!'
But the people of the town had gone inside,
So the animals, still with their pride,
Trod back to the bush, and far away 
Mabye today was just not their day



 
Ah, yeah, so, enjoy!? :) I hope you like it!

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28 Comments
  • Fuori

    RE: Ah, in your comment, I thought it had said people only asked for pictures with just your brother. Sorry for the confusion!


    6 months ago
  • Fuori

    This is such a fun concept. RE: That's so funny! Why just him, and not you too?


    6 months ago
  • V-Rose

    Hey! I'm back! And with another chapter for Never Really Real!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/225065/version/474597


    6 months ago
  • Riya

    re: actually I've never been skiing weirdly. I think it's because my parents are terrified of it lol. I love the snow when it's nice and white but I hate how it just takes like weeks to melt and by then it's just gross black sludge.


    6 months ago
  • V-Rose

    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/224943/version/474241
    This is the link that will take you to the latest chapter of Never Really Real!


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Re: Thanks :) It was!


    6 months ago
  • Riya

    re: Yeah actually I live in the North-Eastern US where we are infamous for having terrible winters. How is the snow where you are?


    6 months ago
  • McK13

    re: of course! Thanks so much :)


    6 months ago
  • snowywolfa

    re: my dogs are named blackey and bentley; my guinea pig is named bugsy; my ducks are named tomato, tofu, and onion


    6 months ago
  • Nyla

    Wow! This was such a nice piece! I love the ending specifically, "Maybe today was just not their day" because it has a hidden message to never give up and that was really cool to add that in there! And I love how the whole piece really shows the selfishness and self-absorption of humans so great job on that! RE: Aww, thank you!!


    6 months ago
  • McK13

    This is so cute and lighthearted and I really love the message! Like al3xandra_9219, it really does sound like a fun children's book :)


    6 months ago
  • al3xandra_9219

    This is so cute! Very original with a neat message. Nicely done, I really like this :) It sounds like a children's book I used to read


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Re: Yeah maybe. That's fine :)


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Re: Thanks!


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Re: No I'm doing it on our computer.


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Re: Hmm I don't think I can do that. Well you'll just have to come over some time and I can show you!


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Re: I can't seem to download it. Also, I don't know how to blank out my face (tho it's not really that important, people have seen my face here before lol)


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Hmmm....how did you make yours the pfp?


    6 months ago
  • The Ravenclaw Dragon

    This is really good! It's a very interesting concept. The rhythm and beat of this is amazing. Also, about my March Grab Bag Piece, I wrote another story kind-of like the time-travel piece (two enemies brought together in a different world) but expanded it. The link is below. Keep on writing!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/218919/version/459745


    6 months ago
  • snowywolfa

    Re: Yeah the pfp is of my dog, thank you, what're your Guinea pigs’ names

    This is amazing; I love it, especially because uhm animals are amazing. You have so much talent and I loved reading this


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Re: I don't know how you can see them tho....is there any way to share the link? Wait lemme see if I can give you the link.. https://toonme.com/r/8mIFa6fl and https://toonme.com/r/EYUJfmiK . Do they work?


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Re: Ohhh it's so cool! I tried it and I love it :P


    6 months ago
  • Peyton Feltham

    Re: thank you for the correction im not always the best at spelling!!!


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Re: Ohh yeah it's cool! Where'd you do that?


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Re: Awww ok. I will! Yeah it was lol :P What is your profile picture btw?


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Also, were you planning on doing the peer review summit? I am :)


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Re: No problem! *gasp* You went to Charlotte's house without ME? I am saddd :( (jk I'm not lol, tho I do want to catch up today) Oh you're not dumb, but yeahhhh that was obvioussss :PPP


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Re: Aww thanks! Yes indeed lol :P Ooh what's the new pfp? And this is great! A bit sad lol


    6 months ago